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J7 by ~JLSilvea:iconJLSilvea:



The canonical future,
of cannons and steam,
you might need a suture,
when you fall apart at the seam.

In a world of politics,
policies and police,
all has fallen to pieces,
people are treated like pigs.

Sudden explosions,
bursts of fire,
cargo helicopters,
and deflated tires.

Every pomegranate
has been replaced with a grenade.
Every bit of tint
has been darkened with shade.

Trees with burnt branches,
telephone poles,
marching through trenches,
but landing in holes.

Robots and mechanics,
war rages on,
guns and machines,
raw material to pawn.

In a world of commodities,
calamity and carnage,
all has fallen apart,
people have lost their hearts.

There is no economy,
democracy,
or communities at all,
and there are no opportunities unless you are willing to fall.
©2007-2008 ~JLSilvea
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Based on a dream I had last night.

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~ngatti:iconngatti: Nov 10, 2007, 3:03:24 AM
how can U remember all your dreams, thats an amazing ability... I usually forget 80% of them the minute I wake up, or U do have that ability some people have of being somehow in controll when u dream and so u can focus and shape them, or wake up willfully...?

If i'd have to paste the parts I like here, then the whole poem would be here... every word in it is craftfully (hope i didn't invent that word just now) placed into its place

Well done, Again

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~JLSilvea:iconJLSilvea: Nov 10, 2007, 3:10:43 AM
I can't really control my dreams. There are only a few occasions where I'm actually able to. For some reason, I just seem to remember everything and write it down.

I think craftfully is already a word, it sounds like one.

Thank you so much. XD
~ngatti:iconngatti: Nov 10, 2007, 3:17:04 AM
You're wellcome

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~Passionfruit-angel:iconPassionfruit-angel: Nov 10, 2007, 4:05:44 PM
Beautiful, powerful poem. You must also have a vivid imagination to have such a dream

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~JLSilvea:iconJLSilvea: Nov 10, 2007, 9:04:07 PM
Thank you. I do have a very vivid imagination and my dreams are complete astral projection, like I'm actually there.
~Passionfruit-angel:iconPassionfruit-angel: Nov 11, 2007, 10:02:16 AM
Mine can be realistic especially when I don't want them to be. First night after buying my new flute (cost my dad £2000) I dreamed I snapped it in half

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~JLSilvea:iconJLSilvea: Nov 11, 2007, 12:38:51 PM
Wow, that would be a scary dream to have, especially after paying so much for the flute.